Re: Space Merchants Inner Game Bead added Posted by Robert C. CohenGM Game One on October 24, 1997 at 01:17:19:
In Reply to: Space Merchants posted by Steve Devine on October 16, 1997 at 08:07:59:
Your description really made me want to read the book.
A couple of things I would suggest would help the
move work within the Inner Game and in relation to
the other moves:
1. Make some specific comment on how the book or
themes relate to "inside/outside" desticntion
specifically. (Add question marks to the end of all
your sentences under "Relation to the core wave" if
this is a partial full submission.
2. If you get a chance to dig up a quote that would
be great. If I get a chance I might look for one or
two as well.
3. Describe what Space Merchants has in common with
Adbusters and Brazil respectively so the connection
tunnels won't be empty.
Well those are my thoughts.
One other thing. Your description immediately reminded me
of the giant blimps advertising "Off World" in
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